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Pretty but broken face by ~Angelofnothingness:iconAngelofnothingness:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Open




despicable
I see your pretty face
smashed against the mirror
destroy the discrace

happy,content and joyful
is how I used to be
then sh became sad
she's become somthing like me

but then I look at the face
so pretty and fine
then i realize
it's mine

I am just a ghost
and no longer do exist
becaue of these slits
on her wrists
©2006-2009 ~Angelofnothingness
:iconangelofnothingness:

Author's Comments

'I see your pretty face,smashed against the bathroom floor.What a discrace....'
one of my favorite song quotes

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love 1 1 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 1 1 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
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~MechanicalMayhem Apr 9, 2006, 3:09:56 PM
Wow that's deep . . .and sad. so much pain, so much tourment. At least you'll always friends here to keep that last line from happening. you get an A in my book.

--
A man and a machine
an angel and a demon
The mechanical man
the sad faced someone
Leviathaan
Guardian
Onii-kun
Imouto-chan
:iconlordofthedamned:
~Lordofthedamned Apr 10, 2006, 12:45:41 AM
nice, it good, pretty and extrodanry sad, personally i like the 1st 3 lines, they r the greatest.
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~Angelofnothingness Apr 11, 2006, 4:03:52 PM
thanks..but it seems my friends are forgetting me..
everyone ends up forgetting me in the end...even my own family..

--
Drive drive your vultures home. You're killing me. Just Bury me.
Yeah, Well that's what I said. And I said exactly what I meant.
You're killing me. Just Bury Me.
-Blueprints for future homes;Norma Jean
:iconmechanicalmayhem:
~MechanicalMayhem Apr 11, 2006, 4:29:58 PM
No one ever forgets anyone they've ever met. Our mind is made to prioritize and some of the information gets set aside in storage. And there's me. I'm not, who would be considered no more than an acquaintance, will not forget you or your sister as long as your family suffers. the one thing would could all stand to forget the pain we've suffered. Feel free to leave a comment at my sight, should you seek helpful advice.

--
A man and a machine
an angel and a demon
The mechanical man
the sad faced someone
Leviathaan
Guardian
Onii-kun
Imouto-chan
:iconangelofnothingness:
~Angelofnothingness Apr 11, 2006, 4:33:47 PM
thanks..I'll use your help when I have what seems nothing else..thanks for the help..but it's actually just me..my sister suffers over her deceased sister(her sister I am not related to)I suffer over her and my recent heartbreak

--
Drive drive your vultures home. You're killing me. Just Bury me.
Yeah, Well that's what I said. And I said exactly what I meant.
You're killing me. Just Bury Me.
-Blueprints for future homes;Norma Jean
:iconangelofnothingness:
~Angelofnothingness Apr 11, 2006, 4:43:12 PM
They're similar words in a song I like by this band called Korn..their song Pretty..
He says:I see a pretty face,smashes against the bathroom floor..what a discrace...who do I feel sorry for?
Those are my fave lines as well...

--
Drive drive your vultures home. You're killing me. Just Bury me.
Yeah, Well that's what I said. And I said exactly what I meant.
You're killing me. Just Bury Me.
-Blueprints for future homes;Norma Jean
:iconmechanicalmayhem:
~MechanicalMayhem Apr 11, 2006, 4:47:18 PM
so I am enlightened about the situation. Well now I might be able to assess the situation properly. Heart ache hurts. I know better than anybody. And it's very touching how you care so deeply over your sister, even though you guys don't always get along (I'm just basing this on what I read). I hope I can be of service to you both and help to ease your suffering.

--
A man and a machine
an angel and a demon
The mechanical man
the sad faced someone
Leviathaan
Guardian
Onii-kun
Imouto-chan
:iconangelofnothingness:
~Angelofnothingness Apr 11, 2006, 4:50:27 PM
I am talking of no one but myself if you read the poem hard enough..and I'm sorry if I said angered but that's not how I feel..

--
Drive drive your vultures home. You're killing me. Just Bury me.
Yeah, Well that's what I said. And I said exactly what I meant.
You're killing me. Just Bury Me.
-Blueprints for future homes;Norma Jean
:iconmechanicalmayhem:
~MechanicalMayhem Apr 11, 2006, 5:01:18 PM
Anger toward a sibling is as regular as the sun rising. NO doubt you 2 have had an argument or 2. It's probably different then my fights with my brother. But I know what you mean. Few thins are as beautiful as sibling love. You'll help her through her loss, and she'll help you through yours no doubt. I hope I can continue to prove of use to both you and your sister. I live to serve and aim to please.

--
A man and a machine
an angel and a demon
The mechanical man
the sad faced someone
Leviathaan
Guardian
Onii-kun
Imouto-chan
:iconangelofnothingness:
~Angelofnothingness Apr 11, 2006, 5:05:51 PM
But my sister is dead..she commited suicide yesterday...sad really..
But her pain was worse living...
All she wanted was to die..leave the pity..leave the pain..let go of the pressures..It hurts saying this but she's gone.
And it's all my fault....

--
Drive drive your vultures home. You're killing me. Just Bury me.
Yeah, Well that's what I said. And I said exactly what I meant.
You're killing me. Just Bury Me.
-Blueprints for future homes;Norma Jean
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